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On Cindy(02)-great effort! the points are very detail and image are very clear and easy to understand too! I think it is very good to highlight the keywords, i should also do so the next time round! For question 2 and 3 she even include the point that "losing 6 electron is difficult...& gaining 7 elecrons is difficult... respectively.", which very few people do so. I think it is good that she include this point which make us understand even clearer. The blogskin is very nice! you link up the people, i should do so soon!


On janis(09)-She put in effort doing it too! information detail as well, pictures are very clear and useful! It is good that she search for images, however she should acknowledge the source next time round. For question 2, i think she never include the blacket and put(+) charge. For question 3,she should also include the atomic structure of sulfur atom and sulfide ion, it should be sulfide ion instead of sulfur ion. I think maybe next time font can be more clearer and bigger so it will be easier to read! To conclude, she did well too!


On Jieen(13)-great effort as well! nice answer! it is easy to understand and pictures are very clear too! i have difficulties finding her mistake. i think the words can be bigger next time so it will be easier to read! nice and peaceful song that make me feel like continue reading your blog! is good that you link up the people too!